Spiritual Rock Band

Two Worlds by Visioneers
Music and Lyrics by Serguey Shinder


Verse One:

Summer sunsets, misty dawns

The forest and the sea

There is always space on Earth

For every grass and tree

See the eagle in the sky

And underneath his wings

There’s a world in endless love

That lives in harmony

First Chorus:

We’re given this world

To love and to share

To find out the meaning of our lives

All nature exists

In giving and peace,

The law of eternal love

Verse Two:

Life is passing day by day

There’s nothing you can seize.

Catch your dream and it will fade

Speak out and words will freeze

Once again this endless race

To chase illusive dreams

Threads of destiny will make

The puzzle pieces fit

Second Chorus:

We’re given this world

To love and to share

To find out the meaning of our lives

Let voice of your heart

Lead you through the dark

To find out the law of life

Third Chorus:

We’re given this world

To love and to share

To find out the meaning of our lives

Let voice of your heart

Lead you through the dark

To find out the law of life

116 thoughts on “Spiritual Rock Band

  1. Absolutely… I liked it alot. Especially enjoyed the music.. and I thought it was great vocalization. Would be happy to hear it on radio… is a bit reminiscent of Scorpions as someone mentioned ..but so what.. always liked them too… cheers and good luck.

  2. Hello,

    i’d like to see how this song turns out on a live concert… Post a video… and update your info @ Last.fm.

    All the luck for you

  3. Truely awesome! God has blessed you all! Praise God!I really enjoy Press Play from the LA Dream Center! You all have alot of true talent! I played the violin since 4 years old! I love all talent! God bless and you all are in my prayers and thoughts!

  4. I am not a musician and can’t offer technical comments. However, I thought it was a good effort. Something kept me listening, the soulfulness.

    I suggest keeping the lyrics more simple and direct. I like the basic message but thought you used too many words.

    The homophobia comments above should be ignored. The world needs male musicians willing to express feelings other than raw sexual desire for women.

    Keep at it. You are on the right track.

  5. Well, Good voices, decent lyrics but Two Worlds by Visioneers is way over produced I think unless it’s for a stage production. I need to get in tune with music in the NE and this is a good opening act.

  6. not to be harsh… but it sounds REALLY cheezy. i mean, your musicianship is spot on (except a couple spots where the drummer adds in some unnecessary double-bass fills and such to remind us “he’s still here”). but yeah, it’s cheezy and dated and it sounds REALLY desperate. it reeks of “local band”. not sure what you are trying to do with your music, but if you are trying to get famous or something, you’re gonna need an overhaul in the “hipness” department. sorry bros.

  7. Thanks for your honest comments, everyone. It’s sad but i will no longer be singing in this project. I’m planning my own project so if you like my voice then you will probably hear me again later! And to Visioneers i wish all the best! Bring your ideas further on. Keep rocking, guys!

  8. I do not agree with the “cheezy” comments. It is a matter of taste, not everyone wants “hipness” as some call it. I think you have something to offer, and I hope you get it back together.

    Best of luck.

  9. Better than I was expecting, after reading all the negative comments. You can’t please everyone, that’s for sure and I know this from my own music. The song could, in my opinion, be much stronger if it was arranged differently and the melody was enhanced, especially in the chorus. It would be good to have a hook in the song that people could easily remember. I wish you all the best in your future projects.

    Pete

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